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His Sentence:
They continued down Idaho Street, passing through downtown Elko, which had more pickup trucks parked along the curb than cars and more cowboy boots on people's feet than shoes.
from Zach's Lie by Roland Smith.

The author uses comparisons to better describe the setting of the story.

My Sentence:
We drove down Manhattan Street, through uptown New York City, which had more cats walking on the streets than dogs and more trash in the park than grass.