His Sentence:
Her, lying in the dark, on the ground, in the basement, waiting for her father to come and help.
from feed by M.T. Anderson
Anderson uses this sentence to describe in better detail where his character's location is by beginning the sentence with a subject then adding multiple prepositional phrases then completing the sentence after them.
My Sentence:
Him, sitting in the daylight, on a bench, in Central Park, eating a hot dog on a cold winter day.
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