His Sentence:
His parents, on the other hand, gulped their food like starved wolves, eager to be on their way to Reno.
from Zach's Lie by Roland Smith.
Smith uses the simile in this sentence to compare how hungry the boy's parents were and to show how much they were in a hurry to leave.
My Sentence:
My friends, unlike me, sprinted the race like a herd of hunted gazelle, trying to aim their way to victory.
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